sarek! at the disco ([info]introductory) wrote in [info]heroes_flashfic,

"Scheherezade"

Title: Scheherezade
Author: [info]introductory
Prompt: Save the Heroes
Rating: PG
Words: ~750
Notes: I came up with this a while back, but I had to modify it a bit to fit in with last night's episode. It contains spoilers for Graphic Novel #9. This is also my first flashfic, and it is probably not as awesome as I thought it would be.





Do you remember your mother, Isaac? You do? I'm glad. I bet she was the kindest woman you could ever find. Did she make you sandwiches when you were sad? Did she kiss your forehead and tuck you in at night?

Did your mother ever tell you stories when you were a child? You're smiling—they must have been good ones. Were they fairy-tales? Adventure stories? Did she read to you from your favorite books, or did she tell you stories from when she was growing up? My mother died when I was five, but she used to read to me every night. The Secret Garden, The Three Musketeers, The Odyssey. I would even go to bed early sometimes so she would read to me longer

Can I tell you a story, Isaac?

Once upon a time there was a girl. No, it's not that kind of story. Once upon a time there was a girl, and she lived with her father and her stepmother. One day her father left, and her stepmother gave her chores and punished her for it; and one day the stepmother died in a fire. But that's not important.

This girl had a power, you see. She could bend people to her will: she would tell a woman to give her a thousand dollars, and the woman would do it. She would tell a restaurant owner to get her the biggest meal on the menu, and he would give it to her on the house. She would tell a man to give her his car, and he would hand over the keys in a heartbeat. If she was here right now, Isaac, she could look into your eyes and tell you to die.

You don't have to be afraid of me. I'm not that girl, after all. She's dead.

But I guess I gave away the ending right there, didn't I? I'm sorry. I was never any good at storytelling to begin with.

So the girl in the story: she lived like a queen, rich off of other people's lives. For the first time since her father left, she felt free; but she was still sad. She had all the money in the world, and still, she couldn't buy a home. Then one day she tried to steal from the wrong man.

Well, she was in a bit of a trouble, wasn't she? This man who had taken her from her life of crime—her powers didn't work on him. She told him over and over to let her go, but he only laughed. You can try all you want, he said. I'm not going to let you leave. He told her why they—it wasn't just him; there were more of them like her, with special powers and abilities—needed her. And she heard him, and she listened, and though she knew it was important, she still said no.

So do you know what the man did next? He shut her in a room by herself for two days: no one to talk to, no one to command. For two days she screamed at the walls for anyone to let her out, but no one came. She felt as if she would die like that, alone, cold, far away from the only place she had ever called home.

And on the third day, he opened up the door and let her out.

He didn't shout this time. He wiped her face and cut her hair and, quietly, so quietly she could barely hear him, asked her again. He pulled out a picture from his wallet and said please. I need you to help me save my daughter. The girl looked at him and saw that he was crying, and that sight moved her more than any amount of money or threats in the world. And she reached out for his hand, and held it, and said, I will.

Does this story sound familiar to you now? About a girl with a mysterious power—a gift—brought here against her will, who learns to use that power for good? The girl in the story, the one who drank and stole cars and hurt others, is dead; so is the old you, Isaac. It's time for you to start over.

I've told you my story. Now please, Isaac, will you paint me the future?

Tags: 05- save the heroes

  • Post a new comment

    Error

  • 23 comments

[info]hebrew_hernia

November 30 2006, 02:11:54 UTC 5 years ago

That gave me goosebumps. I like your Eden voice. And I like what she's saying. Mmm, I love me some gen!fic. *applause*

[info]introductory

November 30 2006, 04:05:39 UTC 5 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed this! (I was incredibly nervous about posting it--I generally don't write in first person, and I wasn't sure if the fic would seem pretentious or not!) Thank you for reading!

[info]darkfire_blade

December 1 2006, 03:03:03 UTC 5 years ago

Ohhh...Eden. I'm actually starting to like her a little bit more as the series goes on. Nice job with your first flashfic! I really hope you do more. Very good Eden-voice

[info]introductory

December 4 2006, 01:17:31 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you for reading! It's nice to get reassuring comments like this. :D

[info]joie_de_vivre

December 2 2006, 03:10:49 UTC 5 years ago

Hey I just caught up with alllll the Heroes episodes this week while ill so I've come back to read this.

&.

omg.

why u rite so gud?!@#@>!?

I LOVE EDEN. I love this. I love youuuuuu! ♥
I think The Secret Garden & A Little Princess must have been her favorite books.

[info]introductory

December 4 2006, 01:19:18 UTC 5 years ago

why u rite so gud?!

OMG U LIE but no really, thank you for reading and I'm so happy that people seem to not hate this fic and I'm rilly glad you like this omg.

[info]rawthorne

December 9 2006, 09:28:29 UTC 5 years ago

Aww, I miss Eden already.

Beautiful fic, though. Your characterization is spot on.

[info]introductory

December 9 2006, 17:50:35 UTC 5 years ago

Aw, thank you so much for reading!

[info]cold_campbells

December 9 2006, 16:19:20 UTC 5 years ago

Great job. Eden died right as I was falling in love with her character, and you've only made me miss her more. You did a great job with her voice, and really everything about this fic' beautiful. Keep up the good work.

[info]introductory

December 9 2006, 18:14:37 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! The hard thing about Heroes is that you don't get so many details--you sort of live with the characters in the present. I do wish Eden was coming back (Mohinder will be crushed when he hears)--but that being said, I'm glad you enjoyed this! (I'm ramblin' again.)

[info]evillittletwit

December 9 2006, 17:14:35 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, yes. Just yes. Everything about this is so right. Eden's past, her way about talking about the past -- "But I guess I gave away the ending right there, didn't I? I'm sorry. I was never any good at storytelling to begin with" gives me goosebumps.

I've always loved Eden's character, right from the beginning, and this is a fitting monologue to place to help her character grow even more. Thank you so much for writing this.

[info]introductory

December 9 2006, 18:16:14 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! It's so hard to write Heroes because it's not your typical show--you only get flashes of backstory and cross-cuts between characters. I was so, so afraid that I'd write Eden into a stereotype, but I guess I haven't, have I?

It always thrills me when I get compliments like this. I'm very glad that you enjoyed this.

[info]meli_64

December 10 2006, 00:39:23 UTC 5 years ago

That was an awesome Eden fic. Too bad she had to die.

[info]introductory

December 10 2006, 21:26:16 UTC 5 years ago

Haha, thanks. And maybe they'll find a way to bring her back someday? (I'm hoping!)

[info]the_dala

December 10 2006, 14:15:22 UTC 5 years ago

Really good! I love the format, and it's a great Eden voice.

[info]introductory

December 10 2006, 21:31:01 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you for reading! I was nervous about the whole Eden-voice thing--I mean, we've only known her for a few episodes, right?--you really have to try and extrapolate based on what you know. I'm glad you liked this!

[info]vampedvixen

December 10 2006, 17:18:34 UTC 5 years ago

Your Eden voice gave me chills. So dead on. And I'm going to squint and see that last line as a bit of Eden/Isaac.

[info]introductory

December 10 2006, 21:33:52 UTC 5 years ago

Squint away! And thank you for the compliments--I'm quite flattered. :D

[info]missyvortexdv

December 10 2006, 21:15:41 UTC 5 years ago

Wow. I'm so glad you wrote it, it's an amazing Eden fic. Chilling and awe-inspiring.

[info]introductory

December 10 2006, 21:35:35 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, thank you so much! It's surprising to see how many people consider this "chilling." I'm glad to have been of service to the fandom! :D

[info]swimqueen18

January 14 2007, 00:38:59 UTC 5 years ago

Fabulous. Srsly.

[info]introductory

January 14 2007, 04:56:05 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! :D

[info]acaciaonnastik

February 24 2007, 04:12:09 UTC 5 years ago

I've had this bookmarked for a while, but seriously fell down on telling you how awesome it is.

Of the not-nearly-enough Eden fic out there, I think this might actually be the best. The style is unusual, haunting, and very fitting for her. In fact, it's seriously influenced my ideas of Eden's character.
Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Facebook Twitter More login options
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…